How's that? I'd be happy to revise or expand on this draft if you'd like.
John explained that he had been working in the comic book industry for over a decade, but had kept it a secret from his neighbors. He didn't want to jinx it, or have people treat him differently. the neighbors john persons comics work
My eyes widened as I saw the credits: "Art by John Persons". I had no idea my neighbor was a comic book artist. How's that
John's expression changed from surprise to sheepishness. "Oh, yeah... I was just working on a project. I guess I left those out." He didn't want to jinx it, or have
I asked if I could come in and see more. He hesitated for a moment, then invited me in.
As I was taking out the trash, I noticed a stack of colorful papers and sketches on the sidewalk outside his house. I picked one up, thinking it was just some kid's art, but as I flipped through the pages, I realized they were actually comic book pages. Professional-quality comic book pages.